by RonS » Sun Jun 04, 2017 2:58 pm
I like the idea of a rental business, I hope it goes well for you. I know an RV dealer in PA has at least one tear they rent out. Seems like a good option for those who like to camp 1 or 2 times a year and can't justify the expense of building or buying their own.
A couple things I noticed on the website, that you probably want to fix (could be more, this is just what I noticed as I was reading it)
There's what appears to be a link on the bottom of every page for "Our Rules and Service Agreement". Clicking it does nothing. From any of the pages. Not sure if it's a issue on my end or yours, but I'm using Firefox on Win10.
On your FAQ page. Under "What to bring", this line needs typos fixed: kithchen clening suplies and trash bags.
There are some other typos on the FAQ page, that line was just the worst one, and why it jumped out at me.
Also in the FAQ is this "The battery automatically charges anytime you plug in the teardrop and has a voltage meter in the cabin so you can keep track." I was wondering "How are they charging the battery through a flat 4 plug?" Then I realized you likely meant any time you're plugged into shore power. Probably want to clarify that.
Don't take any of this the wrong way, I'm just trying to help. Plenty of typos slip out of my office, because people don't have someone else read things over before they distribute them. I keep saying there that we need to have at least 3 sets of eyes looking at things before they're made public, just to try and eliminate as much as possible. One person will catch things another won't. And often the original author "knows what he/she meant" and doesn't see it from the perspective of someone who is reading it to learn the information.
Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway?