Galley Seal "Hiccup"

I wanted to get everyones thought's on this construction method for sealing the galley hatch on my build. I "overlooked"
how I would seal the galley hatch and this is the solution I came up with, based on where I stand now in construction.
I'm thinking it shouldn't have any problems, however I just wanted to get your thoughts before I commit to more of my framing and such. Keep in mind this is a woody and the trim is 1/2" thick (actual thickness).
One thought I had was to eliminate the 2 seals and go to just one by lowering the side trim and moving the 1/4" seal to the outside edge.
I also considered moving the top trim over to create a "drip edge" of sorts.
Thoughts?
Below is a cross section of the hatch.


I'm thinking it shouldn't have any problems, however I just wanted to get your thoughts before I commit to more of my framing and such. Keep in mind this is a woody and the trim is 1/2" thick (actual thickness).
One thought I had was to eliminate the 2 seals and go to just one by lowering the side trim and moving the 1/4" seal to the outside edge.
I also considered moving the top trim over to create a "drip edge" of sorts.
Thoughts?
Below is a cross section of the hatch.