CRITIQUE NEEDED OF PROFILE DESIGN FOR OUR 4X10 TD

Howdy Fellow Members, As a noobie here, I'd really like your feedback about my TD design for a 4'x10' profile! I've been reading a lot of posts and I think I have most of the bases covered, but gee, there's so much to learn!

Cheers, Dave
P.S. The silhouettes are clip-art and don't bare any resemblance to me or my wife...OK, pretty close to our terrier though.

Cheers, Dave
P.S. The silhouettes are clip-art and don't bare any resemblance to me or my wife...OK, pretty close to our terrier though.