I've been thinking for years of basically doing what your left photo shows but on top of a simple utility trailer. My design (in my brain) had an advantage - there are 4 corner supports with a length of 3.5 ft. Theses supports consist of a square tube in a square tube thereby allowing me to raise the roof and pin it in its elevated position. My thoughts were to KEEP IT SIMPLE - If the roof weight is low enough the user could supply the power to raise and lower. While I see that you can't have long corner supports, I'm throwing out my idea only to help spark other ideas.
I like the idea of using your components to build a roof for someone's utility trailer. They could then use a pattern to sew the walls/windows/doors/screens and attach this unit to a purchased utility trailer and voila - instant ultralight tent trailer.
Rather than canvas, please investigate some of the lighter materials. It seems that you want that industrial sewing machine and I can't argue with tool lust - we all have it. But ripstop nylon and silnylon might perform to your expectations at a fraction of the weight; remember, it is on the rooftop and must be lifted. I make almost all of my own backpacking gear. I am on about year 12 for my first silnylon tarp. No signs of degradation. I just finished 2 ultralight hammocks and am currently making hammock underquilts and tarps. I love my thread injector (sewing machine). We manly types must have a manly name for our tools
